Up up... and possibly down!

"Alright, grab your objects that you ordered from this box!" Commanded Mrs Simpson. Anthony Rawlinson, Mitchell and Namar decided to join me as I played with my pitch black frisbee. The game was a little bit like soccer because there were goals, defenders, and throwers. "The rules are: You cannot throw too high, you take turns throwing and you try to get the frisbee that you threw past the opponent's goal without letting it touch the ground" I explained. Meanwhile on the field, Anthony Wen flew the highest kite! Jayden played happily with his dart that's like a vertical slingshot, all you need to do is load the dart, let go and relax as you watch it fly a million miles into the clouds, I'm not sure who's went further, Anthony Wen's kite, or Jayden's dart. I think everyone including me had a wonderful time outside! Wait a minute... where's Jayden's dart!?

Teacher comment:  Nice finishing sentence Daniel!  You have great use of punctuation too.