On Monday Room 4 went sailing.We went on the bus all of us just imagened how facinating or even great it would be on the bus everyone was looking out the windows and seeing all of the amazing veiws there were most of us who would of been just daydreaming out the window and finally we were at bucklands beach for sailing.Everyone quickly took of their shoes and gathered their gear and realised the we auctaully needed our shoes so we all had to rush to get our shoes back on not long after that we had to choose our partners and get our life jackets on then we finally started sailing a few hours or minuets later we had races.The races were a bit annoying because people kept bumping into each other and nearly knocked us off. then we had free time i think the free time was the best because we ridded on the speedboat as the speedboat got faster faster faster and faster it was like we were all gonna tip out of the boat but in the end we did we had to jump out of the boat and i think i swallowed a bit of salt water in my mouth it tasted like fish i was so gross after that we all had to hop out because it was time to go it was a really great experience i wish we could go there again next year!
Wow - you have a lot of information here Taylah. Great. However, you need to reread it to make sure you use the correct punctuation. Try adding some of those similes and adjectives that I know you can do too!
Mrs Simpson
