Room 4 sailing and bucklands beach

On Monday at week 7 room 4 went sailing at Bucklands beach .To learn how to sail.They first showed  us like wut to do. After they were done showing us.We headed off into the ocean and sailed There. I was in Anthonys' boat i got to steer the boat"YAY" i shouted. Anthony got to do the sail it wasn't fun its was soooo boring doing the sail.Also we saw some people standing up and steering so i decided to do it and lots of boats tipped over well? oh?! It didn't tip one of the leaders tipped some people  boat over so they had lifted it back up no wait WE had to lift it up -.- but i hoped one of the HUGE boats  AND OH NO me and some people SAW A SHARK good thing it wasn't near us or something bad could happen.After that we had a race it was soooo boring so i didn't do the race.when the race was finished we headed back to the sea it was a Extremely fun day.

teaching us

heading off

In the ocean .

I like your ideas about the boat and standing up, tipping out and what was fun or boring!  
You need to have a good look at your use of full stops - only at the end of a sentence.  Don't forget spaces too.  
Mrs Simpson