O M G!!!
We are actually here at Auckland Zoo!!
Our amazing zoo experience started at school in class.
We were pumped to travel to Auckland Zoo.
But before we could even look at any of the animals we had a quick talk with the zoo keeper and staff and went over the rules.
After we had a few hours or so to go and explore the zoo! It was very interesting!
Next we had a mouth watering lunch with everyone so that we had loads of energy. Just when you thought it was over we had a long yet interesting talk about... BIRDS!!
But that is not all... once we left out this door, we were lead to a tank but not just any tank a gigantic tank filled with... Creepy Eels!! Their large eyes were burning at you and we learnt a few facts. To be honest with you I was too interested in the eels that I wasn't really listening!! Anyway lets move on...
After learning heaps about eels we learnt about ... Geese!! Believe it or not, the zoo keepers set up fake geese on an island to attract more geese. How cool is that?
Sadly, our zoo experience came to an end!I found the zoo an amazing opportunity to learn about animals. Such as Eels, Otters, Giraffes, Zebras and many more more!!
By:Danika S
Teacher: I love your use of interesting language to grab the readers attention.
Don't use too many exclamation marks though - not every sentence needs one...
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