My group got to see a graffie run and it was only a little baby when it got close to the fence it skided a little bit it nearly hit the fence.we walked around more and we saw zebras they were eating food under the deck.Some people got to sit on the fake elephant and Mrs simpson took a photo of us
We had a really fun day at the zoo everyone loved it but I really really loved it.
Peer Assessment: Great recount! I like your writing but you might need to work on some punctuation. It would have been even better if you had use some similes and good adjectives too.- Daniel
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